Dabble with a Drabble

I recently learned about drabbles, a term I had never heard before. Drabbles are short fiction stories that are exactly 100 words. It is a great test, as a writer, of the ability to use brevity of word choice and be concise. Not always is this necessary but when needed, having this skill set is advantageous. I decided to test my ability to write a drabble.

As I sat down and attempted to come up with a subject matter, no fictional ideas came to me. So much of what I write about is non-fiction. I found myself continually coming back to a story I wanted to tell. It was about another writer that has been reaching out and helping me quite a bit in becoming a better writer and more astute. I realized, it may not be categorically a ‘drabble’ but it would give me the experience and practice of writing one. Beyond that, if the story moves me, perhaps it might be more likely to move the reader. So I wrote my piece, confining myself to exactly 100 words with a beginning, a middle and an end per the requirements of a drabble.   I share it with you, my followers. 

The background story is the talented writer friend has suffered with a short coming for over a year now.  This has directly affected her ability to write. She has focused her energy instead on another gift she has which still shows her God given talent to touch others.  

A Story Not to Be Forgotten, Writer Mary Adele Cluck

Growing up in an Italian family is growing up in a vibrant family with lots of personality!  It makes for an interesting cast of characters and perhaps that had something to do with Mary Adele’s initial love of using her imagination and reading at a young age as a means of escape. 

Buffalo was not a prosperous place to grow up either, more of a city of hard-working folks with just enough income to put food on the table. Her parents insisted her, the oldest and her two younger brothers attend Catholic schools.  Those in that parts of NY were some of the traditional hard-nose typed type you read of where the nuns could be cruel and the rules rough on children.  

I found it fascinating getting to know Mary Adele Cluck given her background as both

an Italian and a New Yorker; we had that in common and both landing up in Florida. Her life is an adventure down a path with so many twists and turns where she always seemed to come out a bigger better person.  Life hasn’t always been easy for her but she weathered through all the storms.

Mary Adele credits part of her winning attitude to her role model, her mother.  This parent was a beacon of light believing in all her choices and wanting to share in her daughter’s life struggles in any way she could.  Her mom took time and effort to be an active part of her life when some parents pushed their kids away. This instilled a sense of worth and value in her. 

As Mary transitioned her career from as varied positions as medical assistant, working for the railroad, to Wesley Chamber Executive Director, and many others, she developed skill sets along the way, moving the compilation forward to each subsequent role making her more successful at each.  Mary Adele left her mark where ever she was at. She also managed, in the middle of all these transition to volunteer and serve 13 years in the Army Reserve! 

Nothing has ever held Mary Adele back from pursuing her dreams.  Education was one she placed a high premium on and was unrelenting on wanting to obtain. So no one who knew her was surprised at 42 years old when she went to college and pursued her Bachelor’s Degree. And then at 50, she set out and received her Master’s making her even more marketable. She proceeded to teach as an adjunct professor in marketing.

With her love of education, Mary Adele was caught up in reading and combined with her imagination; early writing was a natural outgrowth for her. Having stories published by Reader’s Digest and Teen Digest showed her that she had the ability, at a young age, to appeal to readers. 

At the back of her mind, always was the ideal of writing and printing a book. 

With the encouragement of her husband Ed Cluck, she tapped 

into her passion for children and contemplated more seriously pursuing her life goal.  Her and Ed had just finished sponsoring 13 exchange students over several years in their home from many countries. With the end of the program, she had the time to balance work and write again. And so it began.....  

Her drive for children’s books came strongly from her ability, as she puts it “to tap into a child’s feelings of being lonely and not having friends and being different.”  So many children experience this and it leads to such feelings of isolation. This seemed like a very healthy way to address it, fun and creative.

Mary Adele always wanted to be someone different and leave a legacy behind.  In writing, she knew this was a way to be remembered and impact one of our most precious resources in life, our children, the makings of our future.  As she described, “Too many children don’t get the opportunity to simply be children these days. To take a child into a different sort of reality with a twist would be memorable and perhaps leave a lasting impression.  I can do something about this through my writing.”

In reading her book, Princess Alana and her Magic Kingdom sold on Amazon, she accomplishes this quite well. Her character comes alive to heal the loneliness of a child. In the process, it lets the reader realize we can and should be allowed to escape with our minds from the madness of the world.  To daydream is healthy.

Parents and grandparents need stories like this to reinforce the importance of being creative in thought, and taking vacations with our imagination. Also it reinforces the value of friendships free of drama where there is no judging, being helpful and not being

hurtful. This story-line shows the heart of Mary Adele which is certainly to be remembered for a long long time. This indeed is exactly what Mary Adele Cluck set out to do and has accomplished! With more books on the horizon, her dream and Alana, also the name of her niece, will live on for years to come. 

Click here to order Princess Alana and The Magic Kingdom

Jeanette Lynn Hopkins Dundas : Living the Dream

Over the last several months I met a neighbor in my community at a relatively small book

club I started.  I quickly learned, from a friend, that she was a writer with several books in

print and many more in the works. I befriended her, not just as a book club member, but 

as an author and with an appreciation for the fact that she was a published writer. I found myself a month later attending a Book Signing she presenting at in the Tampa area. Though the event wasn’t impressive, she was as well as her books. Thus, began my fascination with Jeanette Lynn Hopkins Dundas as a writer.

Jeanette was born and raised in West Tampa Florida at a time where mostly immigrants lived, close to a well-known Cigar Factory in that era.  She fit right in as her single mother and grandmother raising her were both Italian.  Jeanette grew up speaking fluently Italian to communicate with both of them as well as speaking English. 

Her mother Dorothy Gullo Hopkins ran her own business out of her own home for years,

Dorothy Gullo Hopkins

Dorothy’s Reweaving.  As it grew eventually it was moved to Kennedy Boulevard in Tampa with a storefront. This allowed Jeanette to attend a larger more prominent high school, Plant High School. Following this, she went to St. Pete’s College and earned an Associate Degree in Marketing.    

Interesting notes about Jeanette’s family:
 Dorothy, her mother, could not read or write music but had an astounding ear for it and could sing beautifully pitch perfect.
Filomena Gullo Jeanette’s Nanna, as grandmas are called in Italy, had a love of books and began reading to Jeanette from a very early age. Being bright, Jeanette learned the entire alphabet by age 3! Shortly after this began her love affair with reading. This was followed by a continual passion and lifetime love of writing. Jeanette began winning awards for this talent, including an award in College for a poem written about Elvis Presley and later an award for Elvis Presley’s

Nanna, Filomena Fraterigo Gullo,
 (on Lfthand) 

Fan Club, which was quite large by this time,  for her short story which had to include all of his hit songs. 

Speaking of Elvis, you could say meeting "The King"was a pivotal moment in Jeanette’s early life.  Her mom arranged the meeting knowing it would be a highlight in her 11 year old daughter’s life. They left a message on Colonel Parker’s personal phone, Elvis’s agent. They wanted  to confirm he would be filming Follow that Dream the coming weekend  before they made the long drive to Yankeetown, Florida. They also had the name of the hotel he would be staying at, which would be crucial later.  Colonel Parker personally called them back, a good sign! However they were told he could not promise anything because filming would run late and it was hard to get near him but they would try.

When they arrived, the crowds were immense, girls were screaming, grown women were blocking their view, everyone was in awe of The King. It was apparent, she would get nowhere near Elvis through the throngs, though she managed to catch a glimpse. Plan B came to mind, circle back to the hotel, knowing eventually he would return there after filming.  And so, as she stood near and his car pulled up, Elvis got out. Luck was on her side because Elvis made eye contact and saw her.  He literally pulled her close showing a kindness to a young girl in awe of his celebrity status.  As frightened as she was of the crowd pulling and pushing to get near him, he not only sheltered her from everyone but kept her at his side for all the pictures everyone was taking standing next to him that day! 

To this day, the grace and compassion he showed towards her left an indelible mark. See not only  was Elvis kind to her but when she went back to his room to request one last picture with her friend who was too shy to stand  in line that day, he overrode  management and stepped out to take a shot with Jeanette’s best friend.  Thus, nana who had not liked Elvis prior to the trip, became sold on The King too! 

Jeanette is most known for her Bongo Bay Mystery Series sold on Amazon. Even this title is tied into her love of Elvis.  His ex-wife Priscilla Presley wanted to get Elvis one year something quite different for the man who had everything. Her surprise was bongo drums.  Being from Tampa having a passion for the beaches, Jeanette put the two together and formed her series name for her lifelong goal, to be a published writer with an exciting mystery romance series - Bongo Bay Series.  (Sold on Amazon, link below)

Jeanette does a good bit of her writing in either her home in a special area that is light, airy.

 organized but not meticulous.  She is anything but anal, definitely more of a go with the breeze.
Her home has more a of feel like you have just entered a warm summer cottage.  Perhaps she is mirroring her cottage she still owns on the beach in Port Richey, Florida, where she raised her two children.   Being with Jeanette, she gives undivided attention and leans in as if she feels every speaker, everyone has something she can grasp and learn from. Perhaps her author/writer mind is always working!

Her approach, as an author, is to create a character first and then build a story around them. She has to believe the character truly exists so that the story can be realistic.  Only then, does she feel the reader can grab a hold of it and go along for the journey with the twists and the turns.

Many authors feel their craft is limited for the very few unlike Jeanette’s attitude.  She encourages anyone with a desire to write to do so, no matter the age or their background in writing. Furthermore, any hidden desire that has never been tried for fear of failing should be ventured, in her opinion because living is meant to be lived in the fullest and experienced.  Writing to Jeanette “is not about who will read it, it is about expressing your ideas on paper,  if that is something that moves you. Be true to you!"

As the reader,  she wishes for you to leave her stories feeling happy.  She also likes there to be something of value learned and faith to be renewed that change can always occur no matter our circumstances. In her book Stolen Destiny, domestic violence is interwoven in to one of the main characters but not the only storyline. It is illustrated clearly that it does leave scars. The storyline proves that issues kept in the dark, like domestic violence, victims need to deal with in the light of day. Once explored though, a person can capture their true identity and move forward and live fully!

Jeanette strongly believes we should not ever close doors, personally or professionally. Reach for the knob of the doors you want to open, nomatter how impossible the
feat may seem and give yourself the chance, life comes at you

Mr. & Mrs. Dave Dundas

fast and you are worth it! She never dreamed, at this later stage in her life she would be publishing books.  Having a wonderful relationship with her husband Dave gives her added encouragement to continue to fly with her passion. And reading any of her books or writings, you will see she does it quite well! Perhaps you will read them and find you can too!

“Always find a way to come out of your shell in this lifetime.“  Jeanette Lynn Hopkins Dundas

To order any of Bongo Bay Series, see below. 1st installment is Stolen Destiny but each is a stand alone novel. Stayed tuned for 3rd book to come out shortly! 

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